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Twenty two year old Zarish Munawwar has everything in life she could ever ask for; an elite family a high profile status a bunch of good friends and a childhood sweetheart Being childish stubborn imperious extravagant and a bit impulsive at making important decisions pertaining to her life is what perfectly describes her overall personality She takes life easily and can get anything she desires To her life is a bed of roses It is only when she meets Ahmar Muraad her mentor and finance professor at university her perspective tow. Plot was even worse than an Indian drama SERIAL Before trying to write novels you should at least improve your English The grammar and sentence structure was HORRIBLE Reference relating to this Page number 1 the last line of the bookThings about the book that were a let downLack of a well developed climaxAwful plotExtremely amateur use of grammarRun on sentencesNo use of pathetic fallacyNo distinction between day dreams and actual eventsNo coherence between paragraphsPathetic punctuationLack of character developmentCharacters seem to have multiple personality disordersBackground of free indirect speech is not developed at all In short it sucks IT FELT AS IF A FOURTH GRADER HAS WRITTEN THIS GODDAMNED LOUSY BOOK

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Undying AffinityArds life completely changes He looks uite young for his age as every girl at the university thinks he is attractive seductive intellectual and rather intimidating This charming man is every girl’s fantasy and Zarish also finds it hard to resist him But is he fascinated by her Little did Zarish know how one little interaction could bring about so many twists and turns in her life After continuous unsuccessful attempts to avoid him she feels that she is gradually falling for his charm Ahmar however remains oblivious to her fee. A COMPETITIVE AUTHOR IN THE MAKING There is nothing to say about this book but thisA Bollywood MASALA romantic movie in a bookish form a story of a girl who falls for her professorPOSITIVES The author paid great attention to the character development of both protagonists' aka hero and heroine The climax is good although it was a BEEN THEREDONE THAT thing but still it was a little unexpectedNEGATIVES Too predictable Author used so many words repititively which was annoying The length of the book could have been half some of the times it was draggy The character of Haroon and his friendship with Zarish should have been given space in the bookI really appreciate the writer for her effort and my advice for her is Keep writing MISS SARA NAVEED you have that spark in you it just needs some time to glow

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Undying Affinity Read & Download Ì 0 ¸ Twenty two year old Zarish Munawwar has everything in life she could ever ask for; an elite family a high profile status a bunch of good friends and a childhood sweetheart Being childish stubborn imperious extravagant and a bit impulsive at making important decisions pertaining to her life is what perfectlLings She is ready to abandon her childhood sweetheart for him Eventually there comes a time when only he matters to her and nobody else Awestruck by the sudden revelation she is dazed to find out that he feels exactly the same for her Before their love blossoms a slight tragedy falls into their lives Zia Munawwar her father has some other plans for his daughter Will Ahmar fight against the world for his lady love or step back Do not miss this romantic tragedy as it will encapsulate you totally and will stay in your heart forev. One of the charming aspects of this book is that the city of Lahore felt like an individual character I enjoyed how Lahore was brought to life here um but that's it Like many others I felt Haroon was the strength of this novel very likable and his motives seemed real like he was than just one dimensional character If this novel had worked anything other than a love letter to a media figure it would have achieved its literary purpose at least if not actual greatness But however I do understand the allure of muses though maybe next time a little subtlety would go a long way I don't grudge that lovelornness too much For I have been there and sometimes I feel like I haven't come back from those winterlands For I understand appreciate and accept that this book is not aimed at me But as I look around I realize I don't see that many contemporary Pakistani novels or even novelists for that matter despite the vast amount of talent here so I definitely applaud Sara Naveed's efforts And you cannot deny the passion Naveed has for writing and the amount of work she puts into her craft So kudos to her I am really looking forward to her next novel I hope she does better the second time around She does have the potential to shine Goes for anyone trying to write here But remember kids it is the possibilities that kill us